Hi i know this is stupid, since it isnt complete yet

 ok, give him a blue bird, a msx maple guitar, a white outlaw shirt, now think of that, and if somebody can, please do all that in a banstory, and change the eyes to red if you can T.T, well rate the look i have now anyway =D

I think that's what you wanted? Anyways as far as the first look goes you just have too many colours...you have the red in the shirt, blue for pants, yellow for shoes, green for hat, black for hair and cape and white for gloves and eyes. Maybe you should try to focus more on one or two colours...to try and bring it all together. Same thing with the second look too.