-ok so  this is still in progress...so its short D:-



My Names Kinuo, I’m a  16 year old elf girl, I Live in the world of Erinn. I was sent to Erinn from the soul stream, I was guided by Goddess Nao, and led to Leader Castanea. When I first Arrived here I really didn’t know what id do, I was alone, had nothing but the clothes on my back. I wander around the Elf town of Filia. It was dry and hot out in this almost abandoned  place. I wondered if it was the only thing around here as I saw someone walk up to me…
“Hallo~!” the girl called.
“Uhm.. Hi…” I shyly say
“You knew to Erinn?” she tilts her head..
“I … yeah” I say and stand up.
“My names Dedication, Here… ill show you around” she started walking.
I slowly follow as she guided me to this large gate.
“Get on my horse.” she says as a horse appears.
“Uhm.. Ok” I get on the horse and then everything went black.
 Next thing I knew we were in this small camp, she called it Qilla. I look around at the people, big and small, fat and skinny, strong and whimpy. They run around, talk and chat. Dedication walked me over to Alexina
“Ms. Alexina, this is Kinuo shes new to Erinn~!” Dedication announced, everyone stared at me…
“Hi, Kinuo, Hope you enjoy your life in Erinn” Alexina said and proceeded to the other people.

Hi, Kinuo, Hope you enjoy your life in Erinn” Alexina said and proceeded to the other people.
Qilla…what a odd name…soon a boy calls my name
“Kinuo~!” I look over.
“Battle me I dare you!”
 I glance at dedication then answer
“No.”
The boy got  a frustrated look and walked away..
“Come on kin” Dedication grabbed my hand, and practically dragged me to the gate again, Next thing I knew we were in the desert town again.
 More people were here this time, a few people walked over to me.
“New girl..” one said
I back up a little then feel someone behind me
“Watch out” they say.
 Two others step around me and start circling , I look nervously at them and then one put there hand on my shoulder. I flinched and look at them
“Lighten up girly” the boy said to me, I give a embarrassed look and smile
“Yeah. You wont get anywhere if you act like that” another said
“Heh….” great scare the out of me why don’t yah.
“What’s with the look girly?”
“no-nothing..” I started blushing when he got in my face…awkward...
“What’s your name..Girly” Oh how that bugged me “Well Girly?” “GIrly” Rawr.
“Im..Kinuo…” I say and step out of there circle
“Kinuo…Kin” I look back and growl
“Yes. Now what you want?”
“Calm down..” the boy says
“Yeah. And who are you?” I stare at them
“I’m  Sony” the boy says.
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EPIC Cliff -falls off clift- e-e;

I sat and drank a strawberry milk he had made himself, around a campfire with the others watching people set up tents for the night.
“Hey Kin” Dedication walked over
“Hey Dedy”  I saw finishing the drink
Suddenly Dedy dragged me to a tent and claimed that’s where id live…
“Ok..” I said and set down my bag
 I walk back out to see a few boys picking on Sony..
I quietly look wondering what’s going on…
“Sony!” I see a boy kick Sony to the ground..
Another  boy walked from behind Sony and started cursing at him. Then the other boy kicked him again.
I cant watch this.
I walk in the tent and pull out a knife just incasive…putting it in my back pocket.
“Boys~!” I yell and walk out
“Oh look it’s the noob” one says taunting
“Who asked you!” I yell..oh god..
“Beh. You think your strong Girly” the other  boy announced. Out of no where I see a light then a girl run in front of me.  She looked amazing,  purple feathers among her body with wings, she looked so strong…
“…falcon..sage..” a boy mumbled. Falcon sage?
The boys fell to there knees, the girl looks over at me and nods to me, I run to Sony and help him up.
I never saw the girl again that night.
I sat with dedy in the tent
“this girl! She was amazing!” I was so amazed with it, I think it almost annoying Dedy.
“Couldn’t be THAT great” she rolled her eyes..
“But…who is she?” who..