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Condemned in Metus: The Adventures of Elfia the Evil Ghost

Last post 08-28-2009, 7:49 PM by Telomwe. 4 replies.
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  •  05-27-2009, 6:11 PM 2732059

    Condemned in Metus: The Adventures of Elfia the Evil Ghost

    She flew over the ocean of Iria gleefuly. Dead has it's advantages, she thought. She breathed in the brine and sea air as she flew. She left accursed Filia behind her. She would start a new life as a ghost. A better one she hoped. She finally reached land, seeing a few settlers, waiting for their pass to the new land Iria. She flew on to Tir Chonaill and sat in the cement square. She realized Uladh was different from Iria. It was more....carefree, as if something had been lifted from this place and it was celebrating. A person appeared before her, as if out of nowhere. She scrambled back, as instinct from years in prison. That person was a 15-year-old girl, with blue clear eyes and brown straight hair. She had a friendly smile and a nice voice, and talked to her like a frightened animal. She was wearing a elaborate Nathane's Snow Mountain Coat that framed her face in feathery whiteness and blue fabric. Elfia looked at the girl more directly. The girl was seethrough also. She whispered, "Are you ready?". Elfia didn't know what she meant but all of a sudden a white light. She felt lightweight like a feather and couldn't see anything but heard a soft voice saying clear, "The gods have pitied you, though your crimes you will have to pay for still. You will never feel the same, but the gods as punishment will make you remember your past life".  The light disappeared and she was dropped in Tir Square again. She looked at herself through a mirror in a bag. She gasped, This isn't me she thought.. Her green eyes were replaced by red ones, her mouth in a small mouth, her hair into white straight hair. She felt....different.  She was wearing the same clothes though. She breathed in then out...... If the world rebirthed me then the demon is getting what she deserved. The demon was named Creatia. Elfia loathed with every bone in her body. Her new body.

    Is this the gods intended for Elfia?

     



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  •  05-27-2009, 6:12 PM 2732060 in reply to 2732059

    Re: Condemned in Metus: The Adventures of Elfia the Evil Ghost

    Sorry supposed to be Ch3. X3

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  •  05-28-2009, 5:47 PM 2735485 in reply to 2732060

    Re: Condemned in Metus: The Adventures of Elfia the Evil Ghost

    OMG u r really good! write more ^^
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  •  06-29-2009, 2:37 PM 2880995 in reply to 2735485

    Re: Condemned in Metus: The Adventures of Elfia the Evil Ghost

  •  08-28-2009, 7:49 PM 3185153 in reply to 2732059

    Condemned in Metus: The Adventures of Elfia the Evil Ghost Ch4 Preview

    And I finally continue it.

     

    Its a preview will continue later. Meaning in an hour. Sit tight :>

     

    Elfia ignored the petty quests with distaste. The quests were only ways of telling her what to do. She spit on the ground next to her, showing how much she loathed the nagging. The white owls came to her every once in a while. Today it was coming near her, looking a huge piece of snow with wings and black eyes. She pounced on it, grabbing the message from its claws, whispering in its unseen ears, "Don't come here again". The bird flew away after pecking her hand. She wiped her black blood from her index finger, licking it off. It tasted like copper, reminding her of Metus. She shook her head, shaking out the memory. She continued walking down the brown pebble path, which lead to a green meadow. In the middle of it, showed a boy, his short red hair and golden armor, killing foxes. Elfia, stared for a moment, and ran toward him

                                                   ~End of Preview~



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