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A New Beginning- Part 1 (Please post your own character stories :D I'd like to hear of your beginnings)

Last post 10-01-2009, 5:44 PM by Icekage. 4 replies.
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  •  08-22-2008, 9:31 AM 1542182

    A New Beginning- Part 1 (Please post your own character stories :D I'd like to hear of your beginnings)

    "Where-" I began "Where am I?" The room in which I was now standing was almost completely white- and empty, save for a couple of... owls, I assumed, circling overhead. For such a bright room, it was very bleak, and I was alone. To top it all off, I could not remember how I had gotten here. 

              "Larkine..." a voice called. I whipped my head around. There was no one there. Holy RedFlag. "Larkine," it began again, "welcome to your new world." There was a flash so bright, I had to shield and avert my eyes to avoid being permanently blinded by it. When I turned around again, there was a girl, with platinum blonde hair and a pale complexion, fully dressed in black, just standing  there. I rose to get a better look and when I did, I stood there, dumbstruck, not because she hadn't been there a second ago, but because she had... never mind. Anyway, there was now a (very beautiful) girl standing in front of me, smiling at me, and I just couldn't help but smile back. "Welcome to Mabinogi. I am Nao, ferrier of souls." she finally said.

              "Mabi- what now?"

              "Mabinogi, Larkine." she responded, neither annoyedly nor friendly.

              "Mabinogi. What a weird name."

              "Larkine, do you know why you are here?"

              "Actually, no," I admitted, "Should I?" She gave me a gentle smile.

              "No. It is normal, for your kind."

              "My kind?" I asked confused, "What could you mean by that?" She raised a delicate looking arm and pointed at me, the smile faded from her face. She seemed pained as she spoke her next words.

              "Lost souls." she said. My heart skipped a beat. Lost souls? Was I dead? Oh no...

              "Oh," I said for lack of anything better to say, "that's a bother." She giggled. It was a pleasant laugh that reminded me of someone... or something. I couldn't remember what though. In fact, I couldn't remember anything from before I ended up i this room.

              "Do not worry, Larkine. Amnesia is normal for you. I would be worried if you did not have it." she said as-a-matter-of-factly. I was beyond confused now. I was lost. And Nao was creeping me the hell out. Had she just read my mind? "In order for you to start your new life, you must forget your old one." Well, I thought, that's one step out of the way. I don't remember a thing. She spoke softer still. "You have been granted a chance, by the gods, to start over completely. How old are you now?"

              "I'm... I'm fourteen" I said with astonishment. It was the only thing I could remember. That, and my name.

              "No, Larkine, you are not fourteen. You are a ten year old boy with dark skin and black, flowing hair."

              "What?!" I asked, surprised. She produced a mirror for me to view. What she had said... couldn't have been more true. I was younger than I thought, and I was in clothes I never thought I'd be caught dead wearing. Of course, I also thought that I'd live to see old age, but here I was, technically dead, wearing those clothes.         

              "Nao" I began, steadying my voice, "is this what I desired? How can you know that? What I secretly wanted?" When even I don't know myself?

              "I don't Larkine. But the gods of this land do. They have granted you your one wish. To begin again."

              "But-" I began to question her, but she put her hand up, as if to say stop. Then she extended that same hand. I gave her mine, and she pulled me in close, and hugged me. I blushed deeply. I felt the blood rush to my face, and I broke out in a cold sweat. I desperately wanted to pull away, but I found that I could not. Part of me wanted to stay there forever. I felt like I would if I had been drunk. I no longer had control over my own thoughts, or mind. Everythign I knew, even things that I didn't know I knew began to flow from my mind, and, I think, into Nao's.

              "Larkine," she said, "you were a good person. Please remain that way. Like in your previous life and world, there are rules that must be followed. Death, among other principles, still applies here, but not in the way it did when you were on earth." So this place wasn't on earth? "You shall soon find out what I mean. Go, Larkine. Go, and remain vigilant and brave. Enjoy this new life. Good bye." She let go of me. I let out an involuntary cry.

              "Nao! Wait! What does Mabinogi mean?!"

              "It... translates to Song of the Bairds. Good bye, Larkine."

              "Bye..." I said. There was another one of those bright flashes I loved so much, and then I was in another place. This place had lush, green grass, and animals. There were chickens running around all over the place. I was once again lost, but I felt relieved. There was more than that purgatory-like white room in this world. I'd begun to think that that was the only world there was. I gathered up some courage from deep within, and bravely stepped out into this new world. Wherever I was, and whoever I was, I wasn't going to spend the time I had wondering about it. Who knows? Maybe I'd discover some things along the way. Which way, I didn't know, but I walked along anyway. The sun was fading. If I wanted to start my new life, I'd have to begin by finding shelter.
    Name: Larkine
    Pets: Pandala y Silvala
    Below is my personality in pokemon form :D

    So fricking creepy how they got my EXACT personality :O

  •  04-12-2009, 12:18 PM 2535797 in reply to 1542182

    Re: A New Beginning- Part 1 (Please post your own character stories :D I'd like to hear of your beginnings)

    I opened my eyes to find myself in a white room. Everything was white, the platform where i was standing on, the owls flying above me, the sky, even the abyss below me was white. I made a note not to fall down from the edge. suddenly there was a flash of light as a girl descended down onto the platform. The girl was the most beautiful person i had ever met. Snow-white hair tied in two pigtails, blue eyes that had a sense of mystique in them, and wore a black dress that seemed a little too small for the top.

    The girl looked at me as i only gaped at her. "Hello shaosu, my name is Nao, and i've come to welcome you to Mabinogi" Nao said pleasently. "Ma...bin...ogi?" i asked, trying to spell the word. "Yes, better translated to 'song of the bards'. You see, you are what we call, a lost soul. A soul that wanders the Soul Stream, where i come and shepard them to Errin, the world that the Soul stream leads to" Nao told me. "I think i get it, but, your saying i'm dead?" i asked. Nao lowered her head, "unfortunately, your body in your world suffered a terrible tragedy, but the gods allowed you to start a new life here" Nao said.

    i smiled a bit, glad that i can start a new life, but what about my old life, my firends and family, if i had any that is. "But what do i look like now if my old body is gone?" i asked. Nao closed her eyes and a mirror appeared. I saw myself, i had black hair and brown eyes and wore a light blue shirt and brown long pants. "Shaosu..." Nao said and raised a hand once the mirror disappeared. I took the hand but was caught offguard when she hugged me. I immediantly felt the blood rush to my face and broke out in a cold sweat. Yet i somehow felt safe in Nao's arms, part of me actually was enjoying the hug i was given.

    Nao broke away from the hug and folded her arms. "Now, it's time you began your journey" Nao said as light surrunded me. "Good luck" Nao smiled, which was the last thing i remember before whiting out. 

    ---

    I opened my eyes and found myself in a forest, i heard the birds chirping and saw a boy with a helmet near a tree. i went towards the boy and said "Hello". "Nao sent you didn't she? Name's Tin, i'm here to introduce you to Eriin, your new home" Tin said and we shook hands. he soon gave me a sword, a short sword that was glowing. "That's Eiry, she's your guide for now and will help you answer any questions. that trail over there leads to Tir Choniall, where most people start" tin said, pointing to a trail leading to town. "Thanks Tin!" i said nad went down the trail, and to my new home.


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  05-06-2009, 7:27 PM 2655038 in reply to 1542182

    Condemned in Metus:The Adventures of Elfia the evil Ghost Chapter 1

    It was a place covered in darkness and mildew hung from the ceilings covered in vines. A girl wearing nothing but this potato sack was on a heap on the cold stone floor, still unconscious. Will she ever wake up? Then all of a sudden, a creack of a door and a a crack of light appeared. A man...no elf... appeared in a turban and black bow, with those turqiose eyes and henna. He nudged the girl awake. "Wake up. It's time for prisoner dinner-time" The girl woke up. She wasn't elf at all but a red-haired green eyed human. Her chains were rusted and a bloody wound against her slightly tanned skin. "Huh...whatConfused?". The elf man looked at her if she was crazy. "You heard me Elfia its time for dinner," he said more louder.

    "I'm...I'm Elfia? But I was framed."

    "Elfia,  I don't care! Just as long as whoever you are is at the dinner table now".Angry

    "But..."Sad

    "No buts!"Super Angry

    She lumbered upstairs to the light, shielding her eyes with her hands. I wish that stupid demon didn't spill the beans,she thougt.She came to the moldy, stone room. Its ceilings were high and the tables were made of rotten wood. Prisoners sat at the table, some angry, some sad, and some normal.  Elves, humans, and giants scattered around the tables. She lumbered to a table next to another human. The elf cafetaria (i wouldn't say cafeteria) lady threw some slop on Elfia's plate. "Yep this is pretty appetizing", she said. The elf about her age said, "Cheer up. So how long are you gonna be in here? I'm in for 6 years 5 to go".

    Elfia replied sulkily, "35 years 23 to go." Metus. This accursed place that I am forced to live in. This prison has no walls just a canyon but still. It was a prison without walls. Just mountains.  "I hate this place. And that crack over there is giving me the creeps." She pointed to the crack that oozed out darkness. That is what probaly cursed all the prisoners and made them go insane inside Metus.

    "Ok TIME"S UP YOU INGRATES!!!" yelled the elf guard.

    The prisoners slowly made their way back into their cells but not Elfia. She pretened to be grieving but she secretly ahd a knife right under her cloak. "Go on Prisoner I said GO!" the elf guard shouted. Elfia then took out her knife and slashed the elf guards throat and ran. She ran all the way to the gates and kept running. Into the desert.

    Where will she go now that her name is still known everywhere in Iria?

    Look for Chapter 2 peeps

     



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  •  09-30-2009, 7:33 PM 3373357 in reply to 1542182

    Re: A New Beginning- Part 1 (Please post your own character stories :D I'd like to hear of your beginnings)

    ok ima try at this .____.

     

    I woke up to a ligh filled room all i could see was white and owls PURE white owls i should say. I thougt for a second then i whisperd to my self "Am I dead?" then a voice called out to me saying. "Eimely your not dead your in Mabinogi." I turned my head around in shocked she talked to me about this so called "Mabinogi" And sent me on my way....

    DAY 1 the day i ment tarlach

    I was skipping along to go to alby to train (only lvl11 at this time .__.) when i saw a wierd passege way i went into it and all of a sudden i found my self in a snow coverd field. "Were am i?" I said to myself i walked around and found an other portale i went threw it to another place..This time it was REALY snowing i tried to push my self threw the snow it was so dark and snowy i could barl breathe..Untill i bumbed into something and fell on it.

    Me:Huh who.. who did i bump into?

    ???:Do you mind?

    Me:OH im very sorry sir >.< may i ask who are you?

    I saw a handsome man *maby in hes teen's look up to me hes emrald eyes shimmering at me..i felt a space in my heart open that day

    Sry i couldint do more no more ideas 8D Dx


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  •  10-01-2009, 5:44 PM 3379939 in reply to 3373357

    Re: A New Beginning- Part 1 (Please post your own character stories :D I'd like to hear of your beginnings)

    Don't bother with stuff like this, you don't need to prove yourself to anyone.

    Ignore the ignorant idiots.



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    "The essence of combat is to strike the vulnerabilities of the opponent. There is no 'fair' or 'unfair'"
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