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Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

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  •  10-30-2009, 1:27 PM 3590480 in reply to 3587835

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    The Doctor returned after the urine test and Shaosu got up. "alright doctor, tell me, what's wrong with Nao?" shaosu asked. "Well, after going over the urine test and noticing Nao's stomach problems i have come to a conclusion" The doctor said. "And?" Shaosu asked. "Congrats, you're going to be a father!" he said happily. Shaosu suddenly fainted from shock and Kiju sniffed him and licked his face. "Tc did the same thing when i told him that," the doctor muttered as he looked at the know fainted Shaosu.


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  10-31-2009, 12:19 AM 3594552 in reply to 3590480

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    "Great, my husband fainted and I can't carry him because I'm preganant, just great." Nao muttered as Kiju continued to lick Shaosu's face, a moment later the door bursted open and the whole gang was here and they suddenly noticed Shaosu was on the ground.

    "We thought you were in trouble cause we heard a thud, but it apparently was just Shaosu fainting." Basil said,

    "That's what happened to me when I was told I was going to be a father, I was stressed yet so happy that I fainted." I said and noticed everyone looking at me and I started blushing from embarrasement.

    We carried Shaosu back to the castle and laid him on the bed and minutes turned to hours before we suddenly heard him screaming, but his screams were screams of joy.

    "See, told you he'd be happy when he wakes up." I announced and everyone sighed and handed me a couple of coins...



    http://forum.nexon.net/Mabinogi/forums/thread/3567505.aspx (Link for giant's quest)
  •  10-31-2009, 1:34 PM 3597448 in reply to 3594552

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Shaosu was so happy, not only was he married, but he was going to be a father as well! Right now he was hugging Nao tightly, "Um Shaosu, i can't breathe!" she said. Shaosu let go of her as she was panting for air. "Sorry, i'm just so happy that i'm going to be a dad" Shaosu said. "I know, i'm happy too," Nao said. Kiju barked and wagged his tail, panting his little tongue out. "Congrats boy, you're going to have another member of the family to watch over," Shaosu said to him. Kiju barked and jumped on Shaosu, licking his entire face, "Down boy down!" Shaosu laughed, as did Nao.

    Ragnal was watching from the slightly ajar door with a smile, as was Ceez. "Looks like you're going to be an Uncle," he said to his eldest son, "and you're going to be an old grandpa," Ceez replied with a grin, which was later responded by a punch from Ragnal.


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  10-31-2009, 3:40 PM 3598278 in reply to 3597448

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    The gang decided to give them some space for them to breath so we all walked around the castle for a bit, before I took a deep breath and turned to Lisa.

    "I've always loved you from the moment we first kissed and now that I'm going to be a father, I'm more then sure of this." I said and reached into my pocket and kneeled down on one knee.

    "Will you marry me?" I asked as I opened the case of the small box to reveal a shimmering gold ring, oh and I have to thank Basil as well for letting me use some of his jewels as well, as I waited for her to answer, she slowly smiled and started sheading tears but even I could tell they were tears of happiness.

    "Yes," She simply said and I smiled and slided the ring onto her finger and we kissed and we stopped when I heard clapping and practically the whole gang was here and my students were celebrating as well and I smiled and felt like my life was complete...

    After the hype had finished I reflected all that has happened since I was seperated from my parents and when I destroyed my own village, I never thought then that I could have a happy life, but I was wrong, ever since the "hacker" entered the world of Errin, I have been happier then I have for all my life, I have many friends who care about me, I'm engaged and I'm going to be a father soon and although my childhood wasn't so great, this sure is my happiest moment...



    http://forum.nexon.net/Mabinogi/forums/thread/3567505.aspx (Link for giant's quest)
  •  10-31-2009, 6:48 PM 3599526 in reply to 3598278

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    "You know, now that I think about it, Ceez doesn't have a girlfriend, does he?" said Rebecca, just coming out of her room.

    "Yeah, so what?" said Ceez.

    "Well, its just that you don't want to end up alone, do you?" said Shaosu, "I mean, I'm your younger brother, and I got married before you."

    "Well sorry for being busy, unlike you who had all the time in the world to be acquainted with nao," said Ceez.

    "Ah, it's no big deal," said Basil, "You just get to be a bachelor for life."

    "Ah, just leave me alone," said Ceez.

    As he walked away, Rebecca said, "I know of some girls who would love to meet up with him."

    "Ah, he'll be fine, just let him find his own way," said Basil.

  •  10-31-2009, 7:40 PM 3599877 in reply to 3599526

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    I waved Rebecca over and we moved ot a corner in the castle,

    "So, who are these girls?" I asked and we both smiled

    ---------

    A few months have passed and Lisa and I were already wedded and we still have yet be succeeded in finding a girl for Ceez, actually I think he's angry at Rebecca and I...

    "What are we going to do about this?" I asked Rebecca in what was known as the "Ceez match up" room during the time that we both used to make such meetings and posibilities for Ceez but after months, all that we've done seems to have failed so we decided to desemble it.

    "Well, if he doesn't like any of them then we can't force him to, looks like Basil was right, we should just leave him." Rebecca sighed and we walked our seperate paths while I moved back to the school, where my students are always happy to see me...



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  •  11-01-2009, 12:00 PM 3604806 in reply to 3599877

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Shaosu was snoozing against the side of a tree with Nao resting right next to him. They were at their secret place in Osna Sail Forest, a place only Shaosu, Nao, and Tc knew...well TC found them by accident. Shaosu looked at Nao's sleeping form and smiled, noticing her slightly swollen stomach. He still couldn't believe he was going to be a father, but he was still wondering if it was going to be a boy or girl. Shaosu also saw Nao's hair let down and smiled, 'she always looked good with her hair down...' Shaosu thought. nao slowly opened her eyes and looked at him with a small smile. Shaosu smiled and kissed her cheek.

    "Remember when we first came here?" Nao asked. "Yeah, i can on a job for the chainfire guild and found this place and then you showed up and i freaked out and fell into the lake," Shaosu said. "Yeah, you were wet and took your robe off so i hugged you to keep you warm, you were blushing so red from that" Nao giggled. "Yeah, then you sat down and let me fall asleep on your chest," Shaosu said softly as he stroked her hair. "Yeah...you slept like a baby," Nao replied. "Well excuse me, your chest was so soft," Shaosu retorted. "Yeah...and it still is..." Nao replied. "mm-hmm" Shaosu replied. "Don't even try and grab them," nao replied. "Aww..." Shaosu whined.

    Nao turned to look at him and hovered over his ear, "You can grab them when we're in bed later to your heart's content, my pervy little devil," nao said seductively. "You have got to stop listening to Rebbecca's seduction tips," Shaosu told her. "i know...but, i just love using them on you," Nao said. "Yep, to me, you're like my own temptress..." Shaosu replied and then they kissed passionately.


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  11-01-2009, 1:34 PM 3605568 in reply to 3604806

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    A few months ago....

    Athagaraz and Lavender were in bed, making love. One blur of pleasure, and Athagaraz woke up the next morning to find Lavender still asleep in his arms, naked. He rolled her over and went into the bathroom to get dressed. As he walked out, Lavender was getting up and attempting to find her clothes. "Next time, lets check and make sure there isn't anything on the bed that can stab you," Athagaraz said, as he pulled a pencil out of his back. "Well, Next time, lets make sure to begin in our room." Lavender replied.

    Now....

    "I think I'm pregnant." Lavender yelped into Athagaraz's ear. He turned over and replied,"We'll see the doctor, then." Athagaraz got up, streched and was snatched by Lavender and drug out of the house. He looked around to see everyone asleep in their houses. As they arrived at the doctors, he looked to see the only people there were a person with a cold and a snoring drunk. The doctor waved them in, and Lavender explained the symptoms. "Best way to tell is a urine sample." He said, as he handed Lavender a cup for her to,....y'know.

    2 Hours Later

    "Congradulations, your going to be a father." The doctor burst out, as he came out the door. Athagaraz eyes widened and he held still. "Is anything i can do to help him?" He asked Lavender. "Wait for it." Lavender told him. Athagaraz spread his wings and shot off into the sky, whooping and yelling his happiness. He started flying around and buzzed every tree in the Sen Meg area. By pure accident, he found where Shaosu and Nao were, and landed in a tree silently, waiting to tell them the news. He saw them look his way and Nao drawing an arrow. As he saw this, he burst out, "Im going to be a father!!!" And flew past them slow enough for them to see who it was. Athagaraz arrived back in the doctor's place after he had flowen around for 10 minutes. "Okay, Lavender. We have to tell Luke he's going to have a sibling." Athagaraz said jubulantly. Lavender nodded and they walked out. Halfway back, they found Basil in a tree, asleep. "Im going to be a father." Athagaraz screamed at him. Basil fell out of the tree and found Athagaraz standing over him. "Okay then." He muttered, as he brushed himself off and climbed back up the tree.

    Athagaraz arrived and instantly yelled out, "Luke!!" Luke sprinted down the hall and asked, "What, What?" "You're going to have a sibling." As Athagaraz said this, Luke's face grew very dark and he menacingly replied, "Then I guess I'll have to remove the problem."

    "Luke?" Athagaraz asked, as he looked into the spirit world. He saw Luke didn't have one spirit, but two. And neither of them was a human soul.

    "Luke never existed and never will. You fell into a trap, and have sprung it gloriously." The boy hissed as his form started to change. His body turned into shadows, and he lost his form. It changed into the shape of lion and grew to the size of three houses.

    "My dream." Athagaraz muttered. He saw the beast looked the exact same, and he knew what was going to happen next. "Lavender, run for it." Athagaraz yelled. Lavender started to run towards the closest house, which happened to be Ceez's.

    "Now, to remove the pestilence that you will no doubt provide for our destruction." The form said in a different voice from before. The last voice sounded like a snake speaking English. This one sounded like an intellectual person, with a slight growl at the end.

    Athagaraz tried to dive away as the beast started to suck him in. Athagaraz fought against the wind. He thought about how the beast was acting and then allowed himself to be sucked in. The beast roared again, and started to attack the other houses on the block, including the residents.


    "So Zetta Slow!!"
    "Any tree can drop an apple, I'll drop the freakin' moon!!"
    "Zetta Sexy!!"
  •  11-01-2009, 7:05 PM 3608543 in reply to 3605568

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Please Note: I want to write how they defeat the beast. You can write about fighting it, but no killing it. Thats my job.
    "So Zetta Slow!!"
    "Any tree can drop an apple, I'll drop the freakin' moon!!"
    "Zetta Sexy!!"
  •  11-01-2009, 8:00 PM 3608968 in reply to 3605568

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    "I have nothing more to teach you now, you can learn more if you want but I'm not the one to teach you those things, you are no longer my students, it has been wonderful to be the teacher of such fine students but as the bird learns to fly, it no longer needs its mother and so I bid a safe farewell and wish you have a happy life." I said as the students hesitantly waved at me and walked out of the school and I turned to find that there was a beast roaring and destroying Sen Meg and I turned back to my formor students,

    "Looks like your lesson isn't over." I called to them and they dropped their bags and followed me to the area where the beast was.

    When I arrived at the beast, everyone else were there and everyone, apart from the pregnant girls of course, were fighting the beast but found that it was uneffective and I fired a firebolt to test its resistance to fire and as it hit, it turned towards me and it didn't seem to effect it, I pulled out my bow and nocked a arrow from my quiver and fired at its chest but it just yanked out the arrow and continued walking towards me,

    "I need something bigger. Guys, remember the fire jet techique I taught you? I want all of yous to fire a fire jet at the beast and create a smoke bomb to cover me!" I yelled at my students and they nodded and puffed their mouths as they prepared the techique.

    "Fire techique:Fire jet!" We all yelled and fired a long stream of flames into the beast and it seemed to cause some damage as the beast was knocked back but the burns it recieved weren't enough to kill it, never the less I took this time to summon Kamon to my side and as usual, I offered one eye's vision to Kamon and we both ran at the beast while it was still covered in smoke and Shaosu and Basil were beside me, followed by Alastair in the air,

    "Yo, TC, what are you planning? Can you let us in on it?" Basil asked me,

    "Hit the beast with the hardest elemental spell I can muster up!" I replied and he smiled and concentrated on forming the mana into his desired element and I did so as well,

    "Fire techique: Dance of the fire spirit!" I yelled and clapped both of my hands together and blue flames flew out of my hands and flew towards the beast, Shaosu seemed to release a burst of energy from his lightning blade and Basil just used every element there was, all mixed into one meteor, while Alastair did the same except it was in a comet form while Kamon just shot a huge fireball...



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  •  11-03-2009, 8:08 PM 3623997 in reply to 3608968

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Athagaraz was fighting his way through the beasts guts, attempting to find his target. The spirit core. As he made another turn, he was suprised to see Morrighan standing there. "What do you want?" Athagaraz asked. "You're child shall never exist as your species has never proven itself useful and all your kind seems to do is destroy." Morrighan replied. "After all the help I've given second Chance, you think Fallen Angels are useless." "You have only assisted and one of the times, you yourself was the villian." "And even when i have corrected that mistake, I still aren't useful." "You shall have to destroy this beast yourself or your childs life shall end." "Fine, I'll do it."

    Athagaraz countinued trudging along the tract when he saw a burst of flame on the skin. "Looks like they found the beast." Athagaraz muttered to himself.

    He turned another corner and found a glowing sphere containing Orochi. "So, it is you." Athagaraz grimaced as he spoke. Orochi replied with a hiss, "All this time i've been disguised and you never thought to look for me."

    Athagaraz didn't reply. Instead he leapt forward and attempted to slash at Orochi. His sword bounced off the sphere. "The sphere is invincible, held together by the Tiger, while i control the beast and he holds its form together." Orochi hissed. "So, i guess it's time to get out." Athagaraz said. He flew back and slashed through an area of skin. Athagaraz turned around to see a meteor of magic, along with a comet and a giant fireball. Athagaraz exited the slash, as the attacks entered.

    "Where the hell you come from?" Shaosu asked, as Athagaraz landed.

    "I was in the beast. Listen, the Tiger and Orochi teamed up and now we need to eliminate the body of the beast. Orochi controls it's from inside, while the Tiger holds a barrier around Orochi and holds the form."

    "And how do we kill the body?" Shaosy asked. As he asked, an explosion erupted from the beast as the attacks hit it from the inside.

    "Well, I have an idea. I need you guys to distract it while i prepare or else I'll get attacked instantly." Athagaraz said.

    Shaosu and the others nodded. They started to attack with everything they had, from all directions.

    Athagaraz began to collect mana to prepare. After a while of attacking, Basil felt the mana drawing and started to think. "Now what needs this much mana besides a huge attack..."

    Basil came to a conclusion and said, "Everyone surround Athagaraz."

    As they surronded him, Athagaraz finished charging and started to chant. As he chanted, runes started to flash around. Suddenly, a flash of light engulfed them.

    A creature resmbling Athagaraz appeared. It was as tall as the beast and was weilding Oblivion and Oathkeeper. "Now, to destroy you for all of the disaster you have made." The Athagaraz beast announced.

    It slashed with a flurry of blades, penetrating the skin and breaking down the beast. The beast roared back as it was slowly being decimated.

    "Now, Bladed wings!!" The Athagaraz beast announced. Suddenly, a flurry of wings with Swords and weapons of all kinds started to attack. The beast fell on its knees, roared once more and exploded from the multitude of weapons breaking it apart. Orochi fell out and the Athagaraz beast slashed him into peices.

    "Sprit reaper!!!' The Athagaraz beast announced. Its Keyblades started to glow white as the Athagaraz beast started to slash around himself. The spirits of Orochi and the Tiger appeared in time to take the full force of the attack. their spirits were erased from existence.


    "So Zetta Slow!!"
    "Any tree can drop an apple, I'll drop the freakin' moon!!"
    "Zetta Sexy!!"
  •  11-04-2009, 12:06 AM 3625285 in reply to 3623997

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    After the battle was over, we all collapsed to the ground and the Athagaraz beast disappeared and while our wounds were being treated, I couldn't help but to take in what was happening around me. Smoke was all around, some of the buildings were completely destroyed and the clouds seem dark instead of its usual happy whiteness. Will there ever be total peace? I thought to myself and felt my hand being lifted and I turned to find Lisa healing my hand and I smiled as the girl's stomachs were now noticably large and I smiled in knowing that I can retire soon.

    As adults, we must help and guide the new generations, we can't control weither they'll follow the ying or yang side of the circle and we can only be guides, we can't control their will but even then, I have faith in the new generation...

    After the battle with the beast, we attended a funeral invitation from the villagers who wanted us to attend, it was a sad day then but without a funeral, the dead may not rest in peace and so we attended it, the atmosphere was grim and the colours of our clothes reflected our emotions, we remained in silence most of the time and were just as quiet when we returned to the castle after the funeral...

    It was awkwardly quiet...



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  •  11-04-2009, 6:29 PM 3630722 in reply to 3625285

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    To break the awkward silence, Lyla exclaimed, "I'M HUNGRY!!"

    BANG!!

    "Lyla, act like a lady please," said Basil.

    Lyla rubbed her head and said, "What's the point if you're just gonna scare everyone I talk to away? Meanie."

    "Ah, he's just over protective," said Shaosu.

    "It's instinct," Karikan said.

    "I'm not over protective, I'm just placing the other person in an uncomfortable situation to test their resolve," Basil said, "Besides, if they can't stand up to me, how would they stand up to everyone else?"

    "You can't just decide who can or can't," said Lyla, pouting, "Besides, you're not the boss of me!"

    "I beg to differ," said Basil.

    "Basil, you gotta let the girl make her own decisions, trust me, I know that headstrong women will not be tied down," said Athagaraz.

    "What was that?" said Lavender.

    "N-Nothing."

    Everyone laughed manically.

    "Ah, fine, Lyla, if you can find someone, good for you, but be careful, there are a lot of perverted folk out there," said Basil.

    "You do realize your sister's one of them?" said Elen.

    "Hey, I thought we got over that?" Lyla asked.

    "We did, but then there was that incident..."  Elen began.

    "I was sleep walking and I wandered into your room, then I fell on top of you, it was an accident!!" protested Lyla.

    'And I thought Basil was finally gonna' Elen thought.

     "Girls, please stop fighting," said Basil.

    "Yeah, like we haven't had enough of that," said Tc.

    As everyone talked, Basil thought that these times would last forever, up until they were old and worn out.  Even if they didn't, he had a feeling that they would be fine.

    "Hey, everyone, can we go somewhere real quick," said Basil.

    ------

    He led everyone to an empty field, and pointed up.  Everyone looked and saw billions of stars.

    "Didn't I tell you all I'd find a good view?"

  •  11-05-2009, 7:29 PM 3638482 in reply to 3630722

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    "This is brilliant, thanks Basil." I said and he gave me a smile and I turned back to the sky, the stars shimmer like a diamond and is as careless as a diamond, continously providing us light at night, indeed, stars are a wonderful thing.

    "Do you know what I wish?" Alastair began and everyone frowned at him, he chuckled after and licked his lips before continuing,

    "That the world will remain peaceful. Forever." Alastair said,

    "Yeah, that would be nice, but none of those cool battle stories that inspired us in the first place, would have been created." I said and everyone nodded. As everyone walked back to the castle to sleep off the night, the stars continue to shimmer in the night sky, I wish that I could be a star, to give others a light of hope but to also never to worry about a thing...

    BOOM!

    That was all we heard and everyone ran to the roof and I flinched at our mysterious attacker,

    "How did you survive?" I muttered and everyone turned towards me,

    "Do you know him?" Shaosu asked, refering to the tall, old human on the ground,

    "He's the person who almost killed me that night of your wedding, he's my father." I said and it seemed like the who world went silent...



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  •  11-06-2009, 11:09 PM 3647457 in reply to 3638482

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    "I will kill you once and for all!" I yell and draw my sword and leapt down towards him, once I land on the ground, I take a swing at my father but he easily blocks it. I pull my face closer to the locked blades and begin throwing questions at him,

    "How did you survive my explosion? I'm sure it hit you and you should be dead from it!"

    "I was healed by a companion." Dan simply said and another person materializes from no where and my eyes widen as memories flashed before my eyes, back when I was training under Ronal.

    "You!" I yell and I leapt back and studied the pair carefully and realized that their apperance has changed dramatically since the last time I saw her, for one she is a lot taller, prettier and her hair is a lot longer and also some of her body parts aren't even human parts. What's going on?

    "Who is she?!" Shaosu yells the question at me and I clap my hands and produced a doppelganger of myself before turning to answer his question.

    "She was a fellow student, who I knew and have came to love when I was studying under the guardian of Bangor, she's Elesha. Except she's not the fellow student that I once knew, you see, she suddenly disappeared and we declared that she was dead and yet she's standing before me and also some of her body parts aren't human parts." I explain as everyone leapt down from the castle and ready their weapons in their ready stance.

    "Everything will become clear, but if you want the answer, you have to kill me!" Elesha screams and I clench my swords until my hands turn as white as the clouds and charge at them.

    "Tell me, now!" I yell...



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