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Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

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  •  10-27-2009, 3:53 PM 3567459 in reply to 3566494

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Finally, Shaosu, Ceez and Ragnal were as happy as if a miracle had just happened. I felt like my problems were only minor mishaps.

    They were catching up on their mother as I started walking outside to be greated by my students. Yeah, I know, bet you didn't know that I'm a teacher at the Second Chance guild? Well I am and they've seemed to be able to master all the sword techiques that I know and I've left them to learn whatever they want, only the one's who wanted to learn fire magic stayed with me, which were only about twenty out of the a hundred students I originally had, the one's who have stayed with me have done well, they're learning faster then I did when I was their age but then again, I never had a teacher all my life.

    They wanted to know all that happened and they also brought be gifts which in return I showed them a fire display. They were mesmerized by the display and they were amazed and of course I promised to teach them the trick to it.

    At the end of the day, the gang gathered at a campfire and practically talked about what has changed these five years...



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  •  10-27-2009, 6:02 PM 3568310 in reply to 3567459

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Athagaraz found himself in a jetstream pulling him back towards the beast. He flapped his wings desperately, but was sucked into the huge creature's mouth.

    Athagaraz's eyes shot open as he saw the first rays of light in the sky. He turned to see Lavender staring at him. "All it was, was a nightmare okay?" he told her, predicting what she was going to ask.

    "Shouldn't we be getting to our work?" She asked.

    "Oh yeah. Guess it's time for our guild to get a little reward from the people of Erinn." Athagaraz replied. He grabbed a bag full of tools and some lumber and set off with Lavender to work on another one of his secret projects.

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    Tc woke up at the campfire to find that they all had fallen asleep there. He streached his arms and looked around. "Okay, everything's here. Log, Shaosu, giant castle....wait a second." He looked back and saw he wasn't hallucinating. A castle of the likes he had never seen. "Guys," He yelled at them,"Did someone order a castle with extra awesomeness?" "It's free, just because your my friends." Tc looked at the castle again to see Athagaraz, Lavender and Luke on the top tower. "NOW, We have style." Athagaraz yelled. The others got up and saw the castle. "Everyone can move in, just don't stink us out." Athagaraz joked.


    "So Zetta Slow!!"
    "Any tree can drop an apple, I'll drop the freakin' moon!!"
    "Zetta Sexy!!"
  •  10-28-2009, 12:38 PM 3574138 in reply to 3568310

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    "Man Althagaraz, you went all out here," shaosu said when he saw how huge the castle was. "Yeah, i know," the fallen angel grinned. "Well, come on, let's check out the rooms!" TC said and evryone ran off to their own rooms, the couples each got a room for themselves. "Man, these sheets are so soft," Shaosu said when he patted the bed he sat on. "Oh Shaosu..." Nao called to him. Shaosu looked and his nose began bleeding when he saw Nao in a semi-transparent nightgown. "well?" she asked. Shaosu just looked at nao as his nose continued bleeding, Nao giggled and sat on the bed, patting a spot on it. Shaosu just got in night cothes in a flash and into the bed with her. "You're so cute when you're like this," she said and they began to kiss.

    Shaosu returned her kiss and got lost in a blur of passion and pleasure just like before.


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  10-28-2009, 3:39 PM 3575954 in reply to 3574138

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    I was so amazed by the inside of the castle, but then my joy turned to shock as I realized that me room was supposed to be mine and Komodo's. I didn't want to do that, I thought I was a bit too young for that still. When it was time to go to sleep, I changed into my simple nightgown and got in the bed with my waiting boyfriend. I scooted myself to the edge of the bed so that I could more comfortable. Two arms reached out and hugged me, I started to blush as Komodo dragged me closer to him. He then fell asleep, I didn't for a couple of hours. My eyes started to flutter as sleep took control over me, eventually it did and I started to sleep with Komodo's arms around me. It felt more comfortable than at the edge of the bed, I began to dream...

    I saw my mom, she looked scary with her eyes glaring down at me. Wait, down at me? I saw then that I was only a ten year old elf, this was when I had started training. Mom was still staring at me with those angry eyes, "I cannot let such an elf that remembers of the Irinid. I hereby curse you with the disease that everyone else has. Except, you will have comas with memory wipes. Continue on your training, child." she walked away, and then everything blacked out. I was unconscious, I didn't want to see the dark world of despair, "Mommy!" I screamed in this cold dark space, "Mommy! Please, Mommy, don't leave me here!" I whimpered. I curled myself into a ball and started sobbing. It was lonely in here, I didn't want to be in here. Someone please let me out!

    I was shaken awake by Komodo, "You alright? You started yelling, 'help'." he said. I touched my face, it was wet with my tears. I hugged him because I didn't want him to go away too, just like Castanea did. He wrapped his arms around me and started to hum me a familiar song. Sleep again soon reigned and I was asleep, this time the dream was happy...

    Everyone surrounded me, they were having a good time. They smiled at me, I felt happy. I turned to see Komodo jump at me to hug me. I landed on the ground with a thud and Komodo on top of me. He also grinned at me and then kissed me. I was probably the most happiest elf in Erinn, with good friends and a guy who loves me. What more could I want? Music filled the air, happy and merry music. It was Lavender's song, Althagaraz singing along. A happy, great time...


    MABINOGI:

    Name: Karikan
    Age: 13
    Race: Elf
    Lv. 24
    Bowman/Swordsman
  •  10-28-2009, 4:25 PM 3576453 in reply to 3575954

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Nao looked at the sleeping Shaosu that had decided to use her chest as a pillow and smiled. The two's 'lovemaking' was rather enjoyable on her part, as she was finally able to 'do it' with Shaosu, altough, the first time was accidental since she was so happy that she accepted being Shaosu's wife she didn't realize what she was doing until afterwards, this one counted. Nao looked at the articles of each other's clothing that hung around the room and floor, Nao then looked at her nightgown, which was now unbuttoned, revealing her chest and Shaosu sleeping in them. 'Maybe showing my chest was a bad thing...' nao thought as she remembered Shaosu grabbing them during the moment and her moaning from it.

    Nao thoughts were interrupted when she felt Shaosu's head snuggle into her clevage. 'Still, he is my new husband after all,' Nao thought with a smile at the word 'husband'. She wrapped her arms around Shaosu and completely buried his head into her chest, she thought he heard him say "so soft..." and could feel Shaosu's blood trickle down his nose. "Sweet dreams honey..." she whispered as sleep took her over.


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  10-28-2009, 8:34 PM 3579048 in reply to 3576453

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    I could hear moaning and I stopped reading and concentrated on the sound and recognized it as Shaosu and Nao's voice and I chuckled, You've finally answered my question, or have you? I thought to myself and looked up to find Lisa who was rather pale.

    "Are you alright?" I asked as she was still grabbing onto her stomach and I supported her to her bed,

    "Yeah, must be something I ate." She said but I was still worried,

    "You should see a doctor." I said and she nodded,

    "Yeah, tommorrow." She promised and I tucked her into her blankets and watched as she dozed off. I sighed and continued reading my book...



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  •  10-28-2009, 10:13 PM 3579677 in reply to 3579048

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Basil was in a tree, staring at the sky.  He was looking for stars, why? He had no idea, but it was relaxing.  Everyone was in bed ether by themselves, if they were single, or with there partners.  Basil thought a lot about what Elen ment to him,  she was everything, or at the very least 95%.  The other 5  involved his friends and sister.

    "What is it with you and trees?" asked Elen, who was climbing the tree.

    Basil helped her up and said, "Dunno, I just find sitting in a tree and staring at the sky relaxing."

    Elen looked up and said, "Yeah."

    "And for once, no one is trying to kill us!!" said Basil.

    "Ah, give it a few months, something is always trying to kill us," said Elen.

    Basil shook his head and said, "Not this time, if something out there is going to try to rule the world or something, I think it would be fine if the younger ones took over.  Then after that the next generation and the next generation, it is time to pass the torch, as they say."

    "That would be nice, and it would be nice to live a peaceful life without worry," said Elen, "It would be great if the only thing I need to worry about is if I burnt dinner or something."

    "Yeah, it would also be great if Lyla found someone," said Basil, "Then I don't have to be worried about her all the time."

    "If they ever got through your overprotective brother-like glare you mean."

    "I can't help it, besides, a good person for Lyla would mean someone who isn't afraid to stand up to me."

    Elen started to laugh.

    "Well you don't have to put it that way," said Basil.

    "No, it's not that, it's just that I never thought we'd talk about things like this," said Elen.

    "What, about the future?" asked Basil.

    "No, about the future in a positive, non-serious way," said Elen.

    "Times are changing," said Basil, "we all have to move forward."

    "Right," said Elen, "So when are we going to get married?" she asked playfully.

    Basil pulled out a ring and said, "I know a priest who can keep his mouth shut and a quite place nearby, I'll wake up Lyla."

    Elen fainted and Basil had to grab her hand to stop her from falling.

  •  10-29-2009, 12:53 AM 3580307 in reply to 3579677

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    I was walking back to the doctor's place to hear his diagnosis when suddenly I heard Basil and Elen talking and I grinned and clapped my hands together and held them to either sides of me.

    "Fire techique: Art of the doppelgangers." I whispered and the fire started to leak out of my palms and the doppelgangers were formed and I let them eavesdrop on Basil and Elen's conversation while I went to the doctor's place,

    "Oh, almost forgot." I said and gave both of them a scroll with seals on them and instructed them to tap the seals if you get spotted. The doppelgangers disappeared from view and I grinned as I made my way to the doctor.

    "Hey doctor! How's it going!" I said cheerfully as the doctor was also smiling,

    "Congradulations, your going to be a father!" The doctor announced and I literally froze and fainted on the spot...



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  •  10-29-2009, 7:23 AM 3581289 in reply to 3580307

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Shaosu yawned and opened his eyes to find himself in Nao's chest and felt her fingers petting his head. "Morning" she said. "hey..." Shaosu said as he lifted his head to greet her. "Some night huh?" Nao asked. "Yeah..." Shaosu looked at Nao, who was using the blanket to cover her chest. "Did your chest get bigger by any chance?" Shaosu asked. "Well, they did seem a little bigger," Nao replied innocently. "and softer..." Shaosu muttered. Nao giggled and peck his cheek, "Come on, i knew you loved it," she said. Shaosu sighed, he did love it, they just felt so soft. "Um...sorry about groping you last night, i kinda lost it," Shaosu replied when he remembered how he kept grabing Nao's chest last night.

    "It's okay, besides we're married now, "Nao said and hugged him, letting her chest press against him. Shaosu soon had another nosebleed and felt Nao's lips contact with his. "Come on, let's go see the others," Nao replied.Shaosu nodded and grabbed his shirt and pants, "I'll be right back," he said and left to change.


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  10-29-2009, 1:22 PM 3582877 in reply to 3581289

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    As I was unconcious I was having a stressed out moment in my mental mind and I started talking with Kamon and the Paladin.

    "What do I do?" I asked the two spirits and they chuckled,

    "Last time I heard, you wanted a child." The Paladin said and I slapped my forehead,

    "Its too early for me, I'm not ready!" I said and walking to clear my head, not that there's anywhere to clear my head, since its always pitch black,

    "I'm going to wake up soon, I can feel it." I muttered to myself and sighed,

    "Just go with the flow, your still a young boy to me, even though you are as old as I am." Kamon commented and I took a deep breath and readied to be hit back to conciousness...

    I took a few blinks, as the sunlight blinded me and I the doctor and Lisa were next to me and as soon as I woke up, Lisa was calling my name and the doctor took out a torch and shined it into my eyes and checked my pupils.

    "Don't worry, your boyfriend just fainted from the shock of the news." The doctor said and smiled as he left the room...



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  •  10-29-2009, 5:09 PM 3584856 in reply to 3582877

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Not Story: Any body got any idea how we're gonna wrap this up?
  •  10-29-2009, 7:05 PM 3585836 in reply to 3584856

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Not Story: Dunno, i wanna write about Nao getting pregnant with Shaosu's child, unless someone wants to do it? On seecond thought, i'll write a little bit.

    Story: Shaosu and Nao looked around for the others and checked the rooms. Shaosu found Komoda and Karikan sleeping peacefully in their arms, to which the couple smiled. When they checked Alastair and Rebbecca's room they saw their clothes all over the floor and the two Formors getting intimate, which was given away by the moans of pure pleasure they made in their love making. Shaosu quickly shut the door, now scared for life. They then peeked into Ragnal's room and saw him sleeping peacefully with Elaina, Shaosu smiled softly, thanking Morrighan in his head, and shut the door.

    nao smiled softly at her husband and suddenly felt rather sick and grabbed her stomach. "Nao? you okay?" Shaosu asked. "Y-Yeah, just a little stomach pain," Nao replied. "Hang on, i'll find a doctor" Shaosu told her to get some sleep while he went to get the doctor.


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  10-29-2009, 8:12 PM 3586499 in reply to 3585836

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Not story: I have no idea how to wrap it up, I'm just going with the flow...

    Story:

    I finally made sense of everything and we had a little chat and afterwards I was overwhelmed with joy when suddenly Shaosu ran into the room and he seemed puff, he must of ran here.

    "What's the matter? What are you doing here?" I asked Shaosu and looked around the room,

    "Where's the doctor?" Shaosu asked and I pointed to my left and he ran down the corridor and we soon heard him talking with the doctor and they both ran past us.

    "Come on Lisa, I'll take you on my thunderbird." I said we walked outside and I summoned my thunderbird and helped her get on Eragon(F), while I rode on Eragon(M)...

    "What's taking TC so long?" One of the doppelgangers said and the other shrugged,

    "He might have something else to do that was important, never mind, he's going to want to hear this." The doppelganger said and just as he turned back to peek at Basil and Elen, Basil was holding Elen and was struck in the eye by a dagger and he fell back and disappeared. The other doppelgagner quickly tapped the seal that he had and disappeared as well...



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  •  10-29-2009, 8:51 PM 3586762 in reply to 3586499

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    "I hate interruptions," muttered Basil.

    "What was that?" whispered Elen.

    "Nothing."

    They were about to get married, Basil and Elen was at the front of the altar with the priest talking the usual promises and Lyla as maid of honor.  Soon, they kissed and it was made official.

    When they came back to the castle, there was commotion about Nao being sick.

    "Did she have stomach pains?" asked Basil.

    "Was she feeling nausea?" asked Lavender.

    "Yes," said the others.

    "Oh, that means she's probably pregnant."

  •  10-29-2009, 11:24 PM 3587835 in reply to 3586762

    Re: Black Sword: The End...

    Shaosu was followed by the doctor and me on my thunderbird and as I touched down, the doctor had already made inspections on Nao and soon turned to us.

    "Its the same pain that my past patient, Lisa, has been having...hmm... I can't confirm if she is pregnant just from stomach pain but its nothing life threatening, I'll know more once I have a urine test." The doctor announced and handed Nao a cup for her to... well... you know.

    "What? Sis, your pregnant?" Rebecca interrogated and Lisa and I turned crimson in the cheeks and Lisa turned away while I was scratching my head nervously and started chuckling.

    "Well... yeah..." I nervously announced and Rebecca seemed to be smiling,

    "I thought you were going to have a child after you guys marr- Opps." Rebecca realized she had said to much and finished there,

    "Well... it was rather accidental then planned, we did want a child but it was well..." I said, struggling to find an explaination for the earliness of this event and we continued to have a rant for a couple of hours before falling back to our rooms to sleep...



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