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Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

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  •  07-08-2009, 9:43 PM 2924097 in reply to 2923525

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    "HOLD IT!!" said the boy from before, appearing seemingly out of nowhere.

    " Who's that," said the three newcommers.

    "Oh," replied Spazhavok, "That's... come to think of it, we never caught your name."

    "Where did you go anyways?" asked Shadecall.

    "To a friend," said the boy,"She calms me down in my fits. Oh, for the name, uh.. just call me Kid or something."

    Everyone in the room was highly doubting the existence of this friend of his when he asked, "Where are you all going?"

    "Is it not obvious, to look for that hacker," said Shaou, "We are going to kill him and set everything back the way it was."

    Silence, then a odd sound came from Kid, it took a few moments to realize he was laughing,  "Thats rich, like others haven't tried, you don't even know where to look, you are all running out of supplies, and this is the loosest "team" I have ever seem."

    Hoping to save face, Rokuro replied, "Like you know where he is?!"

    Kid, returning to a stoic face, blatanly said,"I have a hunch."  Outbursts ensued (spelling?) until Kid said, "Everyone, calm down, I will take you to my suspicions as to where he is going, as for me, I am perfectly ok hiding here, all I ask for is a couple things."

    "Firstly, we all need supplies, me, Spaz, and Elen will go to Dunbarton to get them, Secondly, all you gold,"  Kid said.

    "Wha!!!"

    "All of our gold, you can't be serious!!!" exclaimed Flowing.

    "Yeah, and why only those 2!!" said Shadecall.

    "Firstly, if all goes well, you can rebuild the gold you have, if not, they don't get wasted. Secondly, i will allow 50k along with expenses to be given to you all, you will need it.  Thirdly, those 2 because Spaz seems skilled enough and Elen is an elf, she can hide, which will be useful, since Dunbarton has turned into a battle ground due to forced [SPAM]'ing."

    "Well I'm an elf!!" responded Rokuro.

    "No offense or anything, but I just don't like you too much," Kid replied.

    "Must have been the whole 'this is my dungeon' speech he said," Zayaa whispered.

    "That reminds me, the second rule was no leaving the dungeon without telling anyone," said Kid, "and with that, our leave, lets go Elen, Spaz."

    The 3 members formed a party and left their hideaway, traveling to Dunbarton, aware of the encoming trouble.

    "Ok, here is the plan, Elen, you sneek in to this point, shoot the nearest Giant, and cause a chain reaction, where the giants, elves, and humans battle each other. Letting us get by and go to our accounts, getting neccessary supplies, while you buy all the food in the restaruant with the money I gave you, any questions?" asked Kid.

    "Yes, Zantos gambit anyone?" joked Spaz.

    Then the three procceded with the plan, ending with a rendezvous at a particular tree.  There was one problem, Elen happened to notice a 'trial.'

    "Hey what was that event with the big croud and everything?" asked Elen.

    "Oh, that was some kangaroo court they hold daily.  They have a 'suspect', put them to trial, and [SPAM] whoever is on."  said Kid.

    "That's horrible," replied Elen, "We should help."

    "We can't," responded Kid, albeit in an oddly strained voice, "There is nothing we can do."

    "There is something..."

    "NO!!! There is nothing, we can not be involved, we are not to be near there!!!" Kid yelled.

    "Coward," said Elen, "We need to save everyone we can, help everyone we can, that is the only way we can stay strong in this place."

    Those words rang inside Kid's head, flashes, glimpses of an old life came before him, the words of his two companions talking to each other never even registered as he wondered, "have i become my own enemy?"

    "Ok," said Kid, "Here is the plan"

    They listened.

    "Can you go over that one more time?" asked Spaz.

    Kid said it again.

    Nobody in that group liked the plan.

    "At the very least, we get out alive." said Kid.  With a mischievous smile on his face, "Lets go save a convict..."

    (So how did I do?)

  •  07-08-2009, 9:44 PM 2924100 in reply to 2924097

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    [spam] = Player killing or some form of it
  •  07-09-2009, 8:05 AM 2925323 in reply to 2923525

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    Then they headed off, To the new world

    "It would appear there are still some adventurers alive after all" a voice said in the darkness of a dungeon. "Yes...i wonder..." another voice, this one sounded a little amused as he looked at the image of the adventurers all chatting around a campfire from a pool of water. "shall we do the honors of meeting them my leige?" the first voice asked. "Patience, let's watch them and see what they're up to" the second voice replied.

    ---

    Everyone sat around the campfire, all laughing and having fun. "Man, kinda makes you think this whole hacker thing never happened eh?" Legendar asked. "Yeah..." Shaosu looked at the fire for a bit. "Hey, you okay dude?" Spaz asked. "huh? Oh yeah, i'm fine" Shaosu said and pulled out a ruby amulet from his robe. "Where did you get that?" Flowing asked as everyone crowded around him. "when i first arrived here, Nao gave me this, i arrived before Iria came out...anyway, Nao gave me this and told methat whenever i rub this, she'll appear" Shaosu explained. "Wow...that's some impressive jewelry" Flowing muttered. "Yeah...want me to show you?" shaosu asked them. Everyone nodded, Shaosu rubbed the amulet once and suddenly there was a flash of light. The shilouette of a familiar person slowly landed on the ground and folded their arms. When the light was gone, Nao was standing next to Shaosu with her usual warm smile. "Hello Shaosu" she said...

    IGN: Shaosu

    Server: Mari


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  07-10-2009, 12:46 PM 2931576 in reply to 2925323

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    "Hmm," said Kid.

    "What?" asked Spaz, "Having second doubts?"

    "No, I am just imagining the rest of this group having fun back at the dungeon around a campfire," replied Kid.

    "Oh, ok, because I am telling you right now this plan is crazy, no one is going to fall for it," said Spaz.

    "Relax," replied Kid, "Oh, I am sorry for mispronouncing a few words from before, it has been a long day for me."

    "You misspelled stuff?"

    "Yeah, being up this much has put a hamper on my thought process, but back to the plan."

    ---------------

     

    In Dunbarton, the place has turned into nothing more than a deathzone.  Player Killing was the only way to get ahead in this forsaken town.  The biggest event was the trial, where a 'criminal' was put to it, being found of possible 'wrongdoing',  In reality, they probably took a random player that wandered near town and killed them in front of everyone, just to preserve their power.  Practically no one escaped this 'trial' due to some hacker in the croud putting up a no-logout-or-channel-change field, n-locc field. You would think they run out of players to kill, but thanks to Nexon, the initial player card everyone got works.

    At the head of the trial, the 'judge' would be the current leader of the town, won over via player killing.  Prosecution would be the 2nd in charge.  And the jury and executioner would be the town, simultaneously making a PvP and killing whoever was on trial with everything but the kitchen sink.  There was no advocate for the condemed, anyone who volunteered was to be killed along with the prisoner.

    Today's head was the same head of the same channel since possibly the beggining of the virus, JackRip, and the 2nd was changable, often since the 2nd always challenged the head, he was Joe for today, who knows who else tomorrow.

    Jack was always fond of being the center of attention, so his entrances were loud, had a rock music background playing in his real room and by any instrument player in the croud, and flashy with his admiring fan's bombs.  After this entrance the announcement some variation everytime, but usually the same, "We are gathered here today to hold counsel over this miscreants, to find these two players guilty or innocent."

    Everyone laughed at the innocent part.

    "Now today's head shall be I, JackRip, my prosecution shall be Joe, and will anyone voulunteer to be the defendant?"  Silence came, then he annoucned, "Ok, the judged shall defend themselves."  More sniggering.

    "Now today's accused shall be the party of Winter and Summer.  What no Fall, Spring, maybe an Autumn?" asked Jack.  "Oh well, we can only handle so much wrongdoing in this town."

    The accused Winter and Summer were a pair of human siblings, Winter was female, and Summer was male, they had pretty much beginner everything, they should have really listened to the warnings and stayed away from town.

    "Now they stand accused of attacking a member of this community, prosecution, what do you say to this?"

    "They did it, everyone in town saw the event, and I say hang'em."

    "The town, do you agree?"

    "Yes"

    "Well in that case..."

    "Hold it, I do not comply."

    Interruption were not part of the usual plan, there was a lot of head turning...

  •  07-10-2009, 7:31 PM 2933358 in reply to 2931576

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    Interruptions were not part of the usual plan, there was a lot of head turning...

    Everyone saw a large, muscular giant wearing a dark blue Giant Traditional Robe with a large hammer on his shoulders. The giant had black hair swept back and brown eyes that had the look of someone wanting to kill anyone before him. On his back was a monster sword that was the size of a 17-year old human. "Who the heck are you?" Jack asked. "You don't need to know who i am, just let the two kids go, and i'll be on my way" the giant said. Everyone laughed,

    "You hear, this guy's asking us to let them go, yeah right!"

    "Get him boys!" Jack yelled. All the guys gathered flew at the giant, the giant smirked and soon swung his hammer. anyone in front of him was instantly sent flying and crashed into the walls. Kid, Elen, and Spaz just gaped, this wasn't part of the plan. "Whoa, he just knocked them out with one swing" some one said. "Doesn't matter, kill him!" another yelled and charged at the giant. The Giant gripped his sword handle on his back and sliced it down, cleaving the poor Formor in two. "If anyone else has anything to say, then say it" the giant told them and propped the sword on his back. No one spoke, "Good...now, let those two go and get the <bleep> out of here" the giant cursed. The people gathered there all ran out as the giant took both humans, untied them, and propped them on his shoulders. "And just to make sure this won't happen again..." The giant placed Winter down and grabbed his sword. "Cover your eyes kids" he told them. The two humans covered their eyes as the Giant cleaved Jack and Joe in two.

    "Well, that settles that...and you three can come out now" the giant called to where Spaz, Kid and Elen were. The three all got out of their spot and cautiously walked towards the giant. "T-Thanks...but who are you?" Kid asked. "Toruk...the name's Toruk" the giant beamed.

    ---

    "Sir, the judge was killed in Dunbarton" a goblin servant said. "What? but how?" a voice asked. "A giant named Toruk sir, appparently he's been causing trouble in the Vales and came here sir" the goblin replied. "Hmm...this complicates things...watch their moves and get the other cities on high alert" the voice ordered. "Yes Leader" the goblin bowed and left. 'Hmm...perhaps these adventurers might become a thorn in my side...hmm' Leader thought. "Shall i take care of them?" a man wearing a white and black Lacard's Layered Mufferler Robe with a black scarf and white angel wings asked. "No, let's watch their moves...and keep an eye out for Alastor, he might be around somewhere" Leader said. The white angel noidded and disappeared. Leader turned his attention to the pool again, this time the image of the remaining adventurers replaced the image of Toruk. That's when he saw Nao was with them, laughing with the others. 'Ah, the Soul stream Guardian...interesting...' he thought with a grin forming on his face...

    IGN: Shaosu

    Server: Mari

    (Oh and btw, Toruk is my Giant character, also on Mari, and the <bleep> thing is used for cursing, just wanted to clarify)


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  07-11-2009, 10:47 AM 2935647 in reply to 2933358

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    'Ah, the Soul Stream Guardian...interesting...' he thought with a grin forming on his face...

    "So...you've been helping out Shaosu even though he didn't have your Support?" Legendar asked. "Yes, and after that hacker appeared Shaosu only asked for my help when it was an emergency, but he's been quiet and managed to stay out of trouble" Nao explained. "Hang on, Shaosu, i noticed you're part of a guild, what happened to them?" Zayaa asked. Shaosu expression changed to sorrow as he looked down to the ground. "...they're gone..." he said. "Gone?" everyone asked. "When the hacker appeared my guild tried to stop him...but they didn't stand a chance..." Shaosu balle dhis hand into a fist and clenched his teeth, "I was there...i tried to stop him...but...i just ran...boss ordered me to run...and i did..." Shaosu's voice started to crack up.

    "Whoa..." Rokuro muttered. "That hacker took everything from me, my friends, my guild...my brother..." Shaosu took out another amulet, this one had the same symbol seen on the floor of the Soul Stream in green. Nao suddenly realized where she saw that. "That's your brother's" she stated. "Wait, you have a brother?" Kid asked as he walked in with Elen, Spaz and Toruk and Winter and Summer. "When did you get here?" Shadecall asked. "We just arrived after Toruk managed to get these two out of trial" Spaz told them. "Anyway, what were you talking about?" Kid asked and sat down. "Shaosu was telling us about his brother" Zayaa explained.

    Shaosu wasn't paying attention but stared at the fire. "I did have a brother, named Ceez...he carried this amulet around with him, it's his lucky amulet he would tell me" Shaosu explained. "But...he's gone...he died when some Formors who served the hacker attacked us, he managed to hold them off but died..." shaosu gripped the amulet then ran off. "Shaosu!" Elen called but Nao stopped her from following him. "Let him be...he needs to be alone for a bit" Nao said.

    ---

    Shaosu stood in one of the hallways, leaning against the wall, tears streaming down his face. 'I'm sorry brother...i sorry i couldn't stop them...' he thought. shaosu looked at the amulet and his mind flashed back to the last words Ceez said to him. 'Shaosu...i want you...to carry this...it'll bring you good luck...kill the hacker...and don't worry...i'll be okay...continue...my...le..ga..cy' Shaosu opened his eyes and soon started crying. "I'm sorry bro, i'm sorry" he muttered. he felt a pair of hands wrap around him in a hug. Shaosu turned slightly and saw who it was...it was Nao...

    IGN: Shaosu

    Server: Mari


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  07-11-2009, 11:14 AM 2935740 in reply to 2933358

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    The Kid was looking upon the new additions to the group: a wild giant and two starters.  Old times, thought Kid.

    "So, what was your plan?" asked Toruk.

    "Excuse me?" replied Kid.

    "What was your plan to rescue these 2?"

    "Oh, our plan was to get Elen and Spaz to 'fight' distracting and causing a ruckus, getting everyone else in the mood to fight, and asking Summer and Winter to play dead.  Add a few bombs, cash in a few favors so they get into the act as well, and everyone would assume Summmer and Winter died in the crossfire, then when things died down, we sneak off."

    "That sound a bit complicated."

    "Meh, not really."

    "So where are you 3 headed?"

    "A Secret ..." began Spaz.

    "WHISPER!" scolded Kid, "or message, or something secretive."

    "A secret dungeon," Spaz said, "but it may take some time to get there."

    "No prob," said Summer, "we got some horses."

    "But only 2," replied Winter.

    "That's ok, Kid can get on my shoulder," began Toruk, knocking Kid off his feet.

    "Sorry, I need to take care of things here," Kid said.

    "Ahh suit yourself."

    -------------------------------

    The Kid wandered to the area where Jack died.  It was a desolate place, everyone was already scurring away, trying to figure out who would be the next judge.

    He's dead, I should be happy, ecstatic, so on about this (insert word) death.  But it doesn't change anything. Does not change the facts one bit.

    Kid sighed as he went off to the shops, now where is that pass?

    ----------------------------

    "So his name is Kid?" Toruk asked.

    "Well, we don't really know, that is just what everyone calls him," said Spaz.

    "He seems like a ..."

    "cautious," suggested Elen.

    "Yeah, thats a good word," said Spaz.

    "And this group, what's it for?" Toruk questioned.

    "We want to find the hacker and bring him to justice," Spaz replied.

    "Count me in"

    "Umm, excuse me, what hacker?" said the party of Winter and Summer.

    "Oh, let me explain," Spaz replied, and so he began the old story of the virus and Shimudoma's abuse of it.

    --------------------

    Eventually, they arrived at the entrance, with the Kid waiting.

    "How'd you?"

    "Shortcut, now hurry inside."

    What they found was the odd sight of the group around the fire, what was odd was Nao's in it.

    "Hello," greeted Nao.

    "Hello Ms.Pryderi, how are you?" asked Kid, like it was an everyday event.

    "Just fine, what about you Mr. Ba.." Nao started.

    *cough*

    "Are you ok Athagaraz?" Nao asked.

    "Oh, just some dust."

    "Ah thats good."

    Spaz, regaining composure, asked, "Um, how are you here?"

    "Oh, let me explain," began Nao...

  •  07-11-2009, 11:18 AM 2935758 in reply to 2935740

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    NOT STORY

    (ok, I have horrible timing, just work my part into Madness 3rd paragraph, possibly ignoring most of my 3rd part as well.)

  •  07-11-2009, 2:18 PM 2936506 in reply to 2935647

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    madness43:

    'Ah, the Soul Stream Guardian...interesting...' he thought with a grin forming on his face...

    "So...you've been helping out Shaosu even though he didn't have your Support?" Legendar asked. "Yes, and after that hacker appeared Shaosu only asked for my help when it was an emergency, but he's been quiet and managed to stay out of trouble" Nao explained. "Hang on, Shaosu, i noticed you're part of a guild, what happened to them?" Zayaa asked. Shaosu expression changed to sorrow as he looked down to the ground. "...they're gone..." he said. "Gone?" everyone asked. "When the hacker appeared my guild tried to stop him...but they didn't stand a chance..." Shaosu balle dhis hand into a fist and clenched his teeth, "I was there...i tried to stop him...but...i just ran...boss ordered me to run...and i did..." Shaosu's voice started to crack up.

    "Whoa..." Rokuro muttered. "That hacker took everything from me, my friends, my guild...my brother..." Shaosu took out another amulet, this one had the same symbol seen on the floor of the Soul Stream in green. Nao suddenly realized where she saw that. "That's your brother's" she stated. "Wait, you have a brother?" Kid asked as he walked in with Elen, Spaz and Toruk and Winter and Summer. "When did you get here?" Shadecall asked. "We just arrived after Toruk managed to get these two out of trial" Spaz told them. "Anyway, what were you talking about?" Kid asked and sat down. "Shaosu was telling us about his brother" Zayaa explained.

    Shaosu wasn't paying attention but stared at the fire. "I did have a brother, named Ceez...he carried this amulet around with him, it's his lucky amulet he would tell me" Shaosu explained. "But...he's gone...he died when some Formors who served the hacker attacked us, he managed to hold them off but died..." shaosu gripped the amulet then ran off. "Shaosu!" Elen called but Nao stopped her from following him. "Let him be...he needs to be alone for a bit" Nao said.

    ---

    Shaosu stood in one of the hallways, leaning against the wall, tears streaming down his face. 'I'm sorry brother...i sorry i couldn't stop them...' he thought. shaosu looked at the amulet and his mind flashed back to the last words Ceez said to him. 'Shaosu...i want you...to carry this...it'll bring you good luck...kill the hacker...and don't worry...i'll be okay...continue...my...le..ga..cy' Shaosu opened his eyes and soon started crying. "I'm sorry bro, i'm sorry" he muttered. he felt a pair of hands wrap around him in a hug. Shaosu turned slightly and saw who it was...it was Nao...

    IGN: Shaosu

    Server: Mari

       -----------------------------------

    The imiges in the pool swirled and swam before the persons eyes, Shaosu and Nao it's last sight. With a high cruel laugh and voice sounded,

    "Hah...how touching. Well, well, well these travelers seem to be slightly stronger than I thought." However under the viel of arrogence something

    stirred inside his mind....

     ------------------------------------------

       Shaosu walked back in seeming to feel better, with the amulets hanging around his neck. "So, what supplies have you guys managed to

    retrieve?", asked Flowing. "Enough food to last us a good while, some potions, bandages, and holy water, and before we left we found this locket in

    the crowd...", Kid replied. "Hey!", Flowing said, "That's mine, I lost it when me and that girl, Ami, were separated when the banshee came...I

    wonder what it was doing in dunbarton..." "You see, when she pulled me into this dungeon, she gave me this locket, said it would enable us to find

    each other..." "You mean to say there might be some one out there who could be TRACKING you?!", kid whispered angrilly, "Do you know how

    dangerous this thing is?!", snaching away the locket. "Give that back, NOW, she had it hidden in her bag, and it was almost impossible to find!!",

    she said angrilly. "Fine, keep your stupid locket, but if it causes trouble it's your FAULT!" Kid said. The group sat in awkward silence for awhile,

    until Shaosu finally said, "Guys it's getting late, lets go to sleep. Everyone pick a spot, while me and Elen put out the fire...." "And make sure to

    watch out for spiders, they crawl into your hair and lay their nests!", Legendarr said to the girls with a grin.

    ---------------------------------

     Tossing turning, Flowing couldn't sleep. Shaosu and Legendar snoring loudly. These imiges slowly flickered out of vision in the pool... He sat

    watching the ripples fade out, twirling a gold locket in his hands.......

    IGN:Flowing

    Server:Alexina

  •  07-11-2009, 4:54 PM 2936986 in reply to 2936506

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    The Kid never could sleep properly, he tossed and turned in his room, trying to blank out his mind, and if that didn't work, he tried to count sheep.  Alas, there are somethings you can't sleep away.  As a last resort, he walked around aimlessly in the dungeon, thinking of everything ranging from math problems to new stories he had read.

    "Hello, still awake," a voice asked.

    A woman with blonde hair in a black dress appeared out of nowhere.

    "Yeah, what about you Rei? Did I wake you up?"

    "No, I couldn't sleep either.  What's troubling you?"

    "Bad memories, Shaosu and Elen reminded me of someone."

    "You have to let things go someday, you didn't mean any harm."

    "..."

    "Besides," Rei said, "Is that really all that's bothering you?"

    "No," replied Kid, "For some reason, I have this horrible feeling that something is watching us."

    "It's probably your imagination."

    "Your probably right, mind playing tricks is all."

    "Get some sleep."

    "I will."

    And with that, Rei disappeared.

    ------------

    Wandering outside to check on the fireplaces he placed to ward off nearby enemies he found Flowing attacking a few wolves.

    "Can't sleep either?" asked Kid.

    "Nope."

    "....."

    "....."

    "Umm, sorry about the locket, it was wrong for me to take it from you."

    "NP"

    "...."

    "Actually, I have a question, Why are you so scared all the time?"

    Silence, seconds ticked by until Kid answered.

    "I am not scared, I just don't trust people.  I don't really trust anything anymore."

    "How come?"

    "I can't trust myself.  I haven't been able to trust myself for the longest time, and if you can't trust yourself, you can't trust anybody."

    "What happened?"

    "I don't want to talk about it."

    Kid rested and looked to the stars with the two moons lighting up the sky.  He wondered what would life be like without the virus, the hacker, everything.  He finally wandered back to the cave when he heard footsteps.  Charging a full load of icebolts just in case, he wandered near the source of the sound and asked, "Who's there?"...

  •  07-11-2009, 5:39 PM 2937196 in reply to 2936986

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    Kid saw a man wearing a white and black Lacard's Layered Muffeler robe with a black scarf and the hood up, covering his face. Kid then saw the white angel wings and knew he waqs a Formor, a Fallen Angel Formor. "Who are you?" Kid asked. The man didn't say anything but walked past him. "I'll let you live for now, you are not my target...but if you cross my path again, i won't hesitate to kill you" the man said to Kid and disappeared. Kid looked around but the man was gone. 'who was his target...i better tell the others' Kid thought. Kid went back to his room when he passed by Elen's room and saw her sleeping peacefully, her ears twitched slightly and her turning to the oppisite side. Kid smiled a little and walked on. But he had the strange suspision someone was watching from afar

    ---

    "You could have killed the boy Midir" he said. "He wasn't my target...besides it felt like a waste anyway" Midir, the white winged man said. "anyway...can i show you something?" he asked. "Sure" Midir said. The pool of water before them changed to show Shaosu resting his head on Nao's lap, the Soul Stream Guardian was softly petting his head and it looked like she was singing a little song with the Malamute and a Yellow Kindo sitting next to her. "Wow...that's a shocker" Midir muttered. "It appears she is developing feelings for him...you know what to do" he said. "alright, but when Shaosu comes knocking on our door and wanting to kill us, you're on your own" Midir said. "Then get someone from the Organization to do it" he ordered. "At once" Midir disappeared.

    He turned to look at the young man sleeping soundly on Nao's lap. It reminded him of something...but he just shrugged it off...


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  07-11-2009, 7:12 PM 2937535 in reply to 2937196

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    Morning came, in real and Erin time.  This particular sunrise had Kid yelling, telling everyone to get up.

    "So how do we get to the hacker?" asked the part of the room that was awake.

    "That is for later, first news," said Kid, who began describing last nights visitor.

    "But now for the reveal of the whereabouts of the hacker.  Like I said before this is only a suspicion, i can not vertify the facts at the moment."

    "That one time you spoke to us,"  Legendar began, "It suggested you met others who looked for the Hacker, what happened to them."

    " I never heard back."  Silence then Kid started again, "This is your last chance to back out, your either in or better off doing who knows what who knows where."

    There was some muttering and a unanimous decision came from the group, "WE'RE IN."

    "Ok, first off, some of you thought he would be hiding in the easiest dungeon in the game since no one would look, but that was just a trap.  Another might go to one of the hardest in the game, but some sources confirmed that's a bust as well."

    "So where is the b.stard?" asked Athagaraz.

    "I'm getting to that.  Anyways, the last possibility one would think of would be the most difficult dungeon in the game to get to in the game, like the ones in 'The other world---'"

    "Um sorry, but what's 'The other world'?" Asked the siblings.

    "Oh, that was a mainstream storyline destination, not really popular to go to anymore since dying is likely, unless you got some major stats. So the hacker is there?" replied Spaz.

    "Like I said, this would be the last possible place any normal person would think of, but recent events and rumors dismiss this possibility."

    "So where is this guy?" asked Rokuro impatiently.

    "Did he just disappear?" continued Shade.

    "Think about it, what do all of these places have in common?" questioned Kid.

    Seconds passed by, then Zayaa proclaimed, "You keep saying 'in the game,' that means something not in the game, something off the beaten path, like this place."

    "Exactly, and based on this hypothesis, I have explored numerous dungeons hidden away, only brought to life by the virus.  In my explorations, both with my character and on numerous forums, I have found a likely subject.  Here, in the middle of the Sen Mag Plateau is a hidden dungeon!"

    "Great, lets go!!" began Shaosu.

    "Hold your horses, not done yet," and pulled Shaosu down back into his seat.

    "Now, as I said, the dungeon you all are most likely looking for is this one, but the hacker has prepaired two more obstacles, one, we need to go on a Wednesday, the 2nd is that it needs a special pass, that I happened to have bought from a peddler in dunbarton."

    "Wait, if the hacker is hiding, why did he give out passes to his entrance?" asked Flowing.

    "The game forces him to, there are only so many things to ignore until the game itself collapses.  The game forces replacation of the pass he made, has various monsters put them out, and we have peddlers grabing and selling them." said Kid.

    "Ok, here's the plan, anyone who doesn't want to go stay resting, everyone else, rise," Shao announced.

    Everyone but the Kid, Winter, and Summer rose.

    "Ehh, why not?"  asked Spaz.

    "Well we're new," said Winter and Summer.

    "And I can't fight anymore," replied the Kid, "I don't have the proper equipment anyways."

    "Well fine, be that way, everyone lets go to the--," began Spaz, until someone came into the dungeon.

    "That settles it, if there is this many people who can come to the same place its not a secret anymore," muttered Kid as the intruder entered the room...

  •  07-11-2009, 7:55 PM 2937685 in reply to 2937535

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    Not Story

    why am i near to nonexistance in the story. ( near nonexistant because i was mentioned a few paragraph ago.) i was hoping for a WEE bit more inclusion.


    "So Zetta Slow!!"
    "Any tree can drop an apple, I'll drop the freakin' moon!!"
    "Zetta Sexy!!"
  •  07-11-2009, 8:05 PM 2937717 in reply to 2937685

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    We forget names quickly (at least i do anyway...)


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
  •  07-11-2009, 8:25 PM 2937781 in reply to 2937535

    Re: Black Sword: Errin's Last Hope (Interactive evolving fanfic)

    "So...you think you can take down the hacker?" Midir asked as he appeared from the shadows. "You again?" Kid asked. "Yes, the master ordered me to get someone in this room, and i know who can get that person for me" Midir glanced at Shaosu and he realized who he wanted. "Over my dead body!" Shaosu readied his claymore. "Very well then..." Midir rised his hand and a white sheathed katana appeared in his hand. Shaosu yelled and charged at Midir, but the white winged man just flicked his hilt guard up. There was a flash and the sound of metal slicing through flesh and Shaosu skidded across the room, holding his side and bleeding badly from it. "Strange...you look just like him...tell me, was your brother named Ceez?" Midir asked as the blood on the katana was absorbed by it.

    "Yeah...wait...you're!" Shaosu suddenly realized when his guild and brother fought the hacker last time there was a white robed man that was with him. "You...!" Shaosu growled. "Yep, i was the man who killed your brother and let you live, and now i can finish what i started" Midir said. Shaosu yelled in rage and flew at Midir, but he only stepped to the side and then stabbed Shaosu. "That's it? I thought you'd be...more of a challenge...oh well...say goodbye..." Midir ripped the katana out of Shaosu as he fell to the ground, a pool of blood gathered around him. "Pathetic, but this is what must happen to Nobodies..." Midir said. "You b.stard!" Spaz yelled and charged at Midir.

    ---

    Shaosu tried to breath but had a hard time trying to. 'I...can't die here...i...promised...everyone...Ceez...i...failed' Shaosu slowly closed his eyes. But somethign happened, he felt himself being lifted up and saw Midir leaving. He then felt himself being laid down on the floor and could see the others crowding around him, telling him hang on. "Guys...forget about me...just...go...kill...the...hacker" Shaosu said and coughed up blood. 'Dang, he's lossing conciseness" he heard Spaz say. Everything was getting blurry, but he soon saw a head of white and then a strange light. The pain soon stopped and his vision began to clear up, he could even breath normally again.

    Shaosu lifted his head and soon saw nao, smiling warmly at him. "W-What?" Shaosu asked breathlessly. "Nao saved you, she used her powers to save your life after we got you away from Midir" Spaz explained. Shaosu looked at nao, who was smiling and blushing a little. "I saw you get hurt and i came here as fast as i could, luckily i made it...you really scared me for a second" she told him. Shaosu smiled and was soon caught off-guard by Nao hugging him, much to the surprise of the others. Shaosu was caught offguard but then returned the hug. "I'm alive, aren't i?" Shaosu told her. "Aww, that's so sweet i think i might PUKE!" a voice sounded...

    IGN: Shaosu

    Server: Mari


    Name: Shaosu
    Race: Human
    Guild: Lancia
    Server: Mari
    ---
    Name: Velran
    Race: Elf
    Server: Mari
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